¨°o.O (هل تريد تحسين لغتك الإنجليزية...تفضل هنا) O.o°¨

[إيمان علي]

عروبة، مثل ما بنقول بالعربي، سكّن تسلم.. وهنا أيضاً نقول: سهّل تسلم هههههههههههههههههه

تعابيرك بسيطة وجميلة وهذا أفضل.. ولكن لي فقط بعض التعديلات النحوية البسيطة

In that world, my ambitions and my small hopefulness are meet together
...
There, I see academic dreams
Social dreams
and another personal dreams
...
All of these are in my life, and after it, i only ask my God for The Paradise
"It's my big dream"

are meet إما أن تكون are met أو meet من غير are

another مفرد، يجب أن تكون other بما أنك استخدمتي dreams

The Paradise ليست خاطئة، ولكني أرى أن paradise اسم علم، يعني بلاش the ولكنها ليست خطأ

[إيمان علي]

أنا حاسة أنه نسرينو طفشت.. ما بدك تصححي الإملاء يا فتاة؟
خايفة تغرقني بالموضوع وتخلع ههههههههههه


أخواتي، ما تنسوا أنه النقاط والفواصل وغيرها تعتبر من أهم ما يفيد معنى الجمل.


نـــــــور

throw لازم تكون through
One day, I stood beside my small window looking through to the outside world. I saw a huge green land with lots of kids playing, and big smiles lighting their happy faces. I saw Muslims from different backgrounds; Arabs, Africans, Indians, all standing together, holding each other's hands, all were One against Islam's enemies, spreading the name of Allah to fill the world.
There, I saw the real meaning of happiness, nothing to fear; I saw a real land of peace.

استمتعت جداً بإعادة كتابة هذا المقطع لأنه مثل قصة قصيرة وكان من السهل إعادة صياغتها

One day. I stand beside my small window look throw it to the world outside there.
I saw, a huge green land, with lot of kids playing there, and a big smile draws on there faces. I saw Arabs ,Africans, Indians and all the Muslim people are standing together, grapping each other hands, walking throw all the Islam enemies, getting the name of ALLAH to the sky.
There I saw the real meaning of happiness, where nothing to be ware from it or to it. It was just the land of peace, the real peace, where love, sympathies and care.

Regards
Noor**Al7ub

[إيمان علي]

رجاء حار، لأي أخت شعرت أني أتخطى الحد بالتصحيح تنبهني، ما بدي أحد يطفش، أنا أحياناً بنسى إني مش مدرسة.. وبمسك القلم الأحمر وفين يوجعك.. هههههههههههههههههههههه

[الأسير المغترب]

GREAT

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IN MY DREAM : I SAW MY >>>> WIFE <<<< DIVING IN THE SKY LOOKING FOR SOME THING MISSED .
WHEN I ASKED HER SHE WAS ANGRY .SHE TOLD ME THAT SHE WAS LOOKING FOR HER SELF OUT OF HER BODY . BUT SHE DID NOT FIND IT
i
I FOUND IT FOR HER

IT WAS INSIDE MY HEART

[زهر النسرين]

السلام عليكم
اعذريني امونة البارح كنت معزومة و طليت بس بالليل ما قدرت أشارك

أعجبني كلامك حول موضوع ال practice لأنه هذا الذي ينقصنا فعلا
علينا استغلال أي فرصة للتحدث باللغة الأجنبية في القسم مثلا كل وحدة تصحح لزميلتها بدون عقد
لأنه مشكلتنا هي أننا نخجل من التعلم و التدرب باللغات الأجنبية ...


بالنسبة لتصحيح الأخطاء أنا هنا ان شاء الله مثل الأول

وفقك الله ورعاك

[tornadoo]

Dear Nesreen
I saw your subjet yesterday .. and i will be very happy because i am now learning English language in the university but now i am in the first year and i did`t take any bookes about that ... so that i want to be your student .......if you don`t mind
I will write in the subject about the dream in next time.. not now but promise me that you will give us another subject
to write about it
with my best wishes
Hiba
please correct my letter

[زهر النسرين]

عزيزتي هبة شكرا لمشاركتك لنا الموضوع

أنا أصحح بعض الاخطاء الإملائية التي أتعرف عليها و الأخت إيمان علي تصحح التعبير

بالنسبة لموضوعك هناك Two Mistakes

did't didn't

bookes books


Inchallah Iman will correct your text

بالنسبة للمواضيع نحن قلنا سنعطي كل أسبوع موضوعا جديدا إن شاء الله

الله ييسر امورك وامورنا جميعا

[نـورا]

أبلة إيمان
مشكورة على التصحيح
ومنكم نستفيد ..
أنا كان بدي أغيرّ another بس ما بعرف ليش نسيتها
تسلمين ..

[خواطر الرماح]

A view from a window in your dreams.



That is wonderful !

What I am going to write it is a hope rather than a dream.



{{ I see my beloved friends and family around me laughing and happy. I see happiness in their eyes and feeling of safe and calm life. }}

Thank you my new friend zahrat alnesreen

[noni103]

السلام عليكم
ببلش بموضوعي اوكي

I wish all my dreams come true because if you dream you'll be able to reach your goals. My first dream in life was to finish high school with high grades and alhamdolelah i did, my second dream was to study pharmecy but it did not come true but still idid study something close to it " CHEMISTRY" , now i have a great job in a great college dealing with great people and I thank allah for every thing my last dream is to have a family of my own.

[زهر النسرين]

Dear Khawater el rimah
Your are welcome
I am happy to see that you appreciate the subject







From this window I dream that one day a Muslim leader governs the world with tolerance.
.. dream that poverty, racism and hunger disapears

I hope that my family and my friends and all the world leave the Words of

(خوف)Allah every where, practise Islam without having

And sure that my big dream is to enter in Paradise and meet The Profet (Peace be Upon Him)
I have many ideas but I can't express myself because i lost my english vocabulary
But inshallah , practising here I' ll try ..

a little dream: a team of children in the futur inchallah
Thank you very much

[noni103]

Dear Nesreen
I saw your subjet yesterday .. and i will be very happy because i am now learning English language in the university but now i am in the first year and i did`t take any bookes about that ... so that i want to be your student .......if you don`t mind
I will write in the subject about the dream in next time.. not now but promise me that you will give us another subject
to write about it
with my best wishes
Hiba
please correct my letter

hi dear,
i'm not the one who should correct but i have noticed something, you have to say correct my words not letters
take care

[زهر النسرين]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

عزيزتي noni103
شكرا لطرحك التعبير

May Allah protect you


مشاركة جميلة اختي
اعتقد ان هناك خطأ إملائي واحد هو

pharmecy pharmacy

بالنسبة لهبة أعتقد انها تعني ب letter رسالة و ليست الحروف

شكرا لك اختي

[إيمان علي]

حياك الله أخ رومانسي، وكلامك يدل على اسمك!

IN MY DREAM : I SAW MY >>>> WIFE <<<< DIVING IN THE SKY LOOKING FOR SOME THING MISSED .
WHEN I ASKED HER SHE WAS ANGRY .SHE TOLD ME THAT SHE WAS LOOKING FOR HER SELF OUT OF HER BODY . BUT SHE DID NOT FIND IT
i
I FOUND IT FOR HER

IT WAS INSIDE MY HEART

In my dream I saw my wife wandering across the blue sky, looking forsomething lost. I asked her about what she is looking for! which made her angry! She said that she was looking for herself which was lost and couldn't be found. But I found it for her, it was inside my heard.

كلام جميل.
كلمة diving تستخدم للسباحة.
وهناك الكثير من الكلمات التي تعني التحليق؛ مثل soaring أو flying ولكني فضلت تغييرها إلى كلمة بسيطة بمعنى تتجول حائرة..

[إيمان علي]

الأخت هبة

Dear Nesreen
I saw your subjet yesterday .. and i will be very happy because i am now learning English language in the university but now i am in the first year and i did`t take any bookes about that ... so that i want to be your student .......if you don`t mind
I will write in the subject about the dream in next time.. not now but promise me that you will give us another subject
to write about it
with my best wishes
Hiba
please correct my letter

Dear Nisreen (spelling of the name now doesn't matter)
I saw your subject (topic) yesterday, and I will be very happy as I am taking an English language class in my first year of college (university). So far I have no books and I would like to be your student if you don't mind.
I will write about the main topic "dreams" next time on a condition to give us another topic to write about.