My hijab is my beauty

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  • senorita
    عضو
    • Nov 2009
    • 62

    My hijab is my beauty

    My hijab is my choice not compulsion,It's my personality

    It is the symbol of a Muslima
    It's the only way a Muslim woman can be identified and known that she
    is a Muslima
    Iam obeying Allah's law, his rule & decree.
    I well never remove my hijab,It's my honor .

    Others think i did n't choose to wear hijab,but it was forced to do it.
    They think that the hijab makes me look older & my dad is totally outraged he does n't like my choices.
    All they can do is to look down on me in fear & in their eyes ,there is a tear ..
    Not because ,I have been stared at or made fun of, but because people are ignoring the one above.







    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة senorita; 04-10-2010, 11:11 PM. سبب آخر: وجود صورة مخالفة
  • senorita
    عضو
    • Nov 2009
    • 62

    #2
    plz sisters correct my mistake,because i have TOEFL-exam

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    • مِسك الشام
      عضو جديد
      • Sep 2010
      • 47

      #3
      May Allah bless you Senorita. You are very determined girl and could apply the sublime instructions of Islam although you live in a non-Muslim country

      as for the passage from a grammatical point you have some mistakes which are the following

      The pronoun I is always capitalized even if it comes in the middle of the sentence

      We should say I obey Allah not I'm obeying because we always obey Allah so we use the simple present

      We have to say I will not well

      It is better to say I have been forced to do it

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      • senorita
        عضو
        • Nov 2009
        • 62

        #4
        المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة مِسك الشام
        May Allah bless you Senorita. You are very determined girl and could apply the sublime instructions of Islam although you live in a non-Muslim country

        as for the passage from a grammatical point you have some mistakes which are the following

        The pronoun I is always capitalized even if it comes in the middle of the sentence

        We should say I obey Allah not I'm obeying because we always obey Allah so we use the simple present

        We have to say I will not well

        It is better to say I have been forced to do it
        oh, sis I am really speechless of this amazing post that u have posted to me & u correct my mistake
        thanks a lot

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        • مِسك الشام
          عضو جديد
          • Sep 2010
          • 47

          #5
          You're most welcome Senorita and I hope to be friends

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          • مريم 74
            النجم الفضي
            • Jul 2008
            • 2111

            #6
            thanks


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            Your subject Jamil (nice) and your words Jamil (nice) , thank you.
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            Best wishes , Regaaaaaaards.
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            • senorita
              عضو
              • Nov 2009
              • 62

              #7
              المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة مريم 74

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              Your subject Jamil (nice) and your words Jamil (nice) , thank you.
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              Best wishes , Regaaaaaaards.
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              Thanks sis
              المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة مِسك الشام
              You're most welcome Senorita and I hope to be friends
              Thanks

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